Well, based on a recent heart breaker that I can't seem to get over. I wrote this. Tell me if you like it.

She is everything
She’s a thousand balloons hoisting me up a helium highway
She’s wind chimes on a stormy day
She’s a magical fire warming my frosty frozen fingertips
She’s every note of every sensuous song
She’s the salty smell of the ocean’s aroma
She’s the long adventurous days of summer
She’s the winter wonderland waiting out my window
She’s the hot beach sand between my toes
She’s the last piece of cake that everyone wants
She’s the spiral staircase in a millionaire’s mansion
She’s the echoes of my every dream
She’s the smell of a mother’s kitchen
She’s lying on a car hood for hours staring down a galaxy of starry skies
She’s the falling leaves of fall
She’s the loose brick in the garden wall
She’s melted chocolate chips in freshly baked cookies
She’s the sound of rushing rivers and the sight of rolling hills
I see her everywhere and she’s no where near me
Her dark silhouette haunts my horizons
Never has my soul been so beautifully broken

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Carpe Diem

I played RS in the days when you didn't have to refresh the page 50 times to get into world 1

So she dumped you?


Nice job, though.

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All that I see is his face grinning, Mephistopheles...

"No more anger, our world is happy and mundane."


Ron Paul dA

How insenstive can you be? That was a wonderful poem that stated your feelings for this person without you actually having to say something. If you can write as beautifully as that, she was an idiot to break up with you, or whatever she did to break your heart, even if it does lead to you to write beautiful poetry.

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