[P] But I can try, right?

Resol-Evets · **Posted:** July 2nd, 2007, 7:30 am

I won't always be the best.
I won't always be there.
I won't always agree with you.
I won't always like your friends.
I won't always have money.
I won't always protect you.
I won't always have a joke to make you smile.
I won't always say the right thing.
I won't always do the right thing.
I won't always be able to read your mind,
I won't always be someone to look up to.
I won't always have the answers.
I won't always know what I'm doing.
I won't always remember.
I won't always have a smile for you.
I won't always help you.

But I can try, right?

kittycatdude · **Posted:** July 2nd, 2007, 12:57 pm

Well written poem. Goo job.

Tahu 1000 · **Posted:** July 3rd, 2007, 5:28 am

Interesting idea.

Saten Ruiko · **Posted:** July 3rd, 2007, 9:48 am

I like it.

Well written, it seemed to hit stronger points as it went along. Nicely done.

germanxgirl · **Posted:** July 3rd, 2007, 10:54 pm

I like it a lot

Is about anyone in particular? Either way great job.

Resol-Evets · **Posted:** July 4th, 2007, 12:39 am

germanxgirl wrote:

I like it a lot

Is about anyone in particular? Either way great job.

Yes it is.

Thorita · **Posted:** July 7th, 2007, 7:34 am

I thought it was really good. I like how you wrote in the pause at the end. Have you let the person this is about/for read it?

Resol-Evets · **Posted:** July 7th, 2007, 7:46 am

She was the first one to read it. But, she's an ocean away (literally!) so yeah.

Hojunhu · **Posted:** July 7th, 2007, 12:13 pm

Well written. DIdn't know you were a poet.

Resol-Evets · **Posted:** July 8th, 2007, 8:19 am

Hojunhu wrote:

Well written. DIdn't know you were a poet.

I'm not, really. :-s

I just felt like writing. hah.

[P] But I can try, right?

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