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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: November 27th, 2007, 5:19 pm 
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I try to put detail into my fights but looks like it's my weak point :|

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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: November 28th, 2007, 6:37 am 
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Dwarf_Moria wrote:
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Nice story. Why don't you try adding more detail in your fights.
If you like the story, tell why. Don't just put up a spam postive comment without backing it up. Suggestions are almost always welcomed, but tell the author what you also like about the story.


You know, some authors like to hear positive feedback, even if it doesn't have a reason with it. And I maybe a hypocrite by saying this, but I think mr. Cat could've said it himself as well.

~Stip~

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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: November 28th, 2007, 2:38 pm 
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Stip45 wrote:
Dwarf_Moria wrote:
The No Hp Mage wrote:
Nice story. Why don't you try adding more detail in your fights.
If you like the story, tell why. Don't just put up a spam postive comment without backing it up. Suggestions are almost always welcomed, but tell the author what you also like about the story.


You know, some authors like to hear positive feedback, even if it doesn't have a reason with it. And I maybe a hypocrite by saying this, but I think mr. Cat could've said it himself as well.

~Stip~


I know authors like to hear good things, but if those "good things" are just words without sincerity they mean nothing. At least they mean nothing to me.

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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: November 29th, 2007, 1:13 am 
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Well, I like to hear good things but I do prefer to have sincerity with them 8) :D

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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: November 29th, 2007, 6:27 am 
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Well, I like to hear good things but I do prefer to have sincerity with them 8) :D


I rest my case, Stip.

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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: December 2nd, 2007, 1:47 am 
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Since I can't choose, I'll let you choose the name of Firestorm's childhood friend from one of these choices! First to reach 5 votes wins...
A. Shana (my avatar)
B. Mia (my favorite Fire Emblem character)
C. Micaiah (another Fire Emblem character I like)
D. Miina (from an anime that only the most anime-loving of anime-lovers will know about)
E. Karen (same as above)
F. Eve (my old avatar)
H. Rinslet (a character I'm quite fond of from the anime/manga series BLACK CAT)

Updated: Eve it is...

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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: December 6th, 2007, 6:48 am 
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OOH, you did a good job of pretty much keeping the characters the same. You make an almost perfect continuation of my story as I get close to the finish. And I also have an idea. In my second book, it is going to be the story of Zezima's life as told by Dwarfkutter. I was planning on making Firestorm (you) his personal bodyguard from birth. In fact, it would be possible to combine our stories into one large epic from two sides of the picture. The rise and fall of Zezima, and the "Unleashing" of Zamorak. Just a thought.

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 Post subject: Re: Fear of the Dark
PostPosted: December 6th, 2007, 9:08 am 
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Lol, my guy wasn't evil to begin with: he was just cocky. He was found by a mercenary and trained by him for a few years before the mercenary dies...and he inherits his building :twisted:

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