OOC: This is a Roleplay based on the anime series "Naruto", two years before the start of the series.

Basically, there isn't a storyline yet, because it's going to develop itself while the interactions between characters progresses. when the characters know each other well enough, it will create the story.

Compromisis of the above: The cast designs the story

Rules:

* During the RP, your character may not interact with ANY of the main characters (Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Neji, The Third etc.)

* Only one character per person is allowed

* NO GOD MODING. Everyone can die, no matter how strong you are. If you don't know what God-moding is, use This topic to find out.

* No power-playing/Auto-hitting. The person who controls the character decides wheter the attack succeeds or fails (be careful not to God-mode with this).

* When speaking out of character, please write OOC: before the post, and IC: if you go in-character again.

* You can't use any character of the main cast, be original

* No-one in this RP has a tailed beast/demon sealed within them

* Think about your Chakra when choosing Jutsu, no-one has limitless supplies of it.

* Don't copy someone else's character.

Basic Character Sheet (Add or remove any parts you'd like, as long as it stays clear to read.):

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Rank:
Appearance:
Kekkei Genkai (If applicable):
Jutsu:
Personality:
History:
Other:

Oh, and before I forget, the minimum age of your character is 11, where the maximum age is 17.


And now for my character and the start of the RP!

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Name: Vitache Uchiha (Ahihcu)

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Rank: Chuunin

Appearance: Vitache has long, black hair, and is about 1,80 meters tall. He wears the classic Uchiha sweater with his clan symbol on the back and has black trousers. When he does not have Sharingan eyes, they are a calm, blue color. He also bears a scar in the shape of a "U" on his shoulder.

His Mangekyou looks a lot like the one Itachi Uchiha bears, but has a white circle around where his pupil is supposed to be.

Kekkei Genkai: (Mangekyou) Sharingan

Jutsu: All of the Uchiha fire jutsus and the Jutsus corresponding to his rank, but due to the Mangekyou can also use Amaterasu (Though he completely depletes his chakra by using it, so he rarely does).

Personality: Vitache is a calm and friendly person most of the time, and prefers to avoid fights as much as possible. He also has a hard time if it comes to talking about his past, as he still has deep grief over the loss of his best friend, and about the murder of his parents.

History: Vitache was born in his parents house in the Uchiha section of Konoha, and lived a happy childhood until he got to the age of five, when he started studying to become a ninja.

At the age of eight, Vitache had passed the exams to become a Genin, and found out about how to use his Sharingan. In the team he was assigned to he met his best friend Masaki, whom he trained with a lot. Every day was like a dream to him, until one day they got "the assignment", as Vitache called it. Just after passing the Chuunin exams at the age of ten, Vitache was been able to use his Sharingan up to its full potential, and his squad was given a B-rank mission at the Hidden Grass Village, when everything changed forever...

Upon leaving the village and entering the forest, they were attacked by a Jonin rank ninja send to prevent them from reaching the village. After appearing from the woods, he immediatly killed the leader of the group, as well as the other member of the group. Screaming in rage, both Vitache and Masaki ran at the attacker, throwing shuriken as they went. The Jonin merely slashed them aside with a sword, cutting right through Masaki's legs and giving Vitache the scar on his shoulder. Because he was ordered to let only the Uchiha live, the Jonin sheated his blade, and vanished back into the woods. Masaki, mortally injured and knowing that he would die soon, asked Vitache to "please end this suffering", so he would die a quick, painless death. Seeing it as a last favor to his friend, Vitache chose to fulfill his request, and his heart nearly stopped when he cut Masaki's throat...

After he had come back from the mission, Vitache chose to leave the ninja, because he was too emotionally weak to be of any current use to them. Out of shame, he left the village and went into the woods, finding himself unworthy of calling himself a citizen of Konoha, or even have the right to bear the name Uchiha, he took a house in a small town on the edge of the forest leading to Konoha. Two years after he left his village, he heard that the Uchiha clan -his clan- had been murdered.

After another year of living in seclusion , he finally chose to pick up his life as a ninja again, even if it was purely to forget his sadness for a while. There he also changed his last name to Ahihcu, and claimed the reason he had the Sharingan was because his grandmother was an Uchiha, who had married an ordinary ninja that was his mother.

Then, when he was fifteen years old, he thought his life was at last beginning to become normal once more...

Other: If he uses the Mangekyou Sharingan's special power (Amaterasu), he depletes all his chakra and is unable to use any further jutsu in battle.


IC: As the sun just started to shine over the buildings, Vitache wandered through the streets of Konoha, moving into the direction of the academy to begin his day. As he arrived, he sat down on a bench near the entrance, pulled a piece of bread out of his backpack, and started to eat.

OOC: I'll be gone for the night, back tomorrow.

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Jackstick wrote:

What if you're getting changed or something and they just barge in, saying "I OWN THE HOUSE, I OWN YOU. DINNER'S READY." ...doesn't seem very fair to me

There are only two small problems that are hindering me from joining this. The first is that all the characters are restricted as being from the village of Konoha. As far as I can see, this doesn't really allow for any form of antagonistic movement, and thus generates what I would consider a bland storyline. I mean, sure, we could create a story between rivals and whatnot. . .but that's exciting for only a short while, whereas a storyline with some sort of antagonistic element tends to be a little more exciting I think.

Second thing I'm not really ecstatic about, and don't take it terribly personally, is your character. =/ I'm sorry, but that's a terrible excuse as to why your character managed to NOT be murderized by Itachi, because your character happened to be away when it had happened. And on top of this, you speak on not god-modding, but your character has very much potential to god-mod. Yes, you watered down the whole mangekyou sharingan thing by saying you can only use it once before your chakra is depleted completely. But you evened this out by saying that the sharingan you possess is capable of using both Tsukoyomi AND Amaretsu. Are you kidding me? >_< First the horribly convenient excuse for survival, and now a mangekyou sharingan that can use TWO specific abilities.

Stip, come now, I know you're smarter than this. Well, there you go. I'll most likely join if you change the 'Only from Konoha' thing. As for your character. . .well, all I can say is that it's kinda cheap that you're using an Uchiha like you are, but it's your choice. I however have a good character planned out if I do join.

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OOC: There, edits complete. Vitache now has an actual reason why he isn't dead, and you can get characters from other villages.

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Jackstick wrote:

What if you're getting changed or something and they just barge in, saying "I OWN THE HOUSE, I OWN YOU. DINNER'S READY." ...doesn't seem very fair to me

OOC: I'll join, but it would be nice to create a sort of alternate storyline with the canon characters. Just imagine if things had happened differently.

BIC:

Name: Kinamaru Hyugga
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Rank: Jounin
Appearance: Wears traditional hyugga robes, and a personalised jounin flack jacket, which allow him to better use his bloodline moves. Is a branch house member, and has the caged bird seal underneath his forhead protector. He has black hair that extends to his lower neck, white eyes, and a clean face, unlike most jounin, because his hyugga techniques have never let anyone get close enough for a slash.
Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan
Jutsu: 61 strikes, 128 strikes, 361 strikes, Defense Rotation, Gentle Fist, Jyuken, all academy techniques, Body Flicker, Shadow Clone, Cheating Technique, Tree Climbing, Water Walking, Summoning Technique-Bird
Personality: Indifferent, feels he should let everything work itself out, and only fights for the protection or himself or his team. Is known for procrastination.
History: Kinamaru was born in a small agricultural village outside of Konoha, when his mother ran away from the clan. His father was a wandering ninja who met his mother, and she got scared upon pregnancy, because she was scared he would be killed if he was born without hyugga eyes.

When he turned 5, his mother taught him about his bloodline when he noticed his eyes were different from all the other children. She trained him in basic ninja skills, then when he turned 8, she allowed him to go to the ninja academy. He graduated at 10 years old, and then the Hyugga found him.

They were at the graduation ceremony, and when they saw him, took him back to the hyugga compound. There, they applied the caged bird seal, then questioned him while he was in pain. He refused to give them any information, but they found out who his mother was when they thought about it. They were unable to find her, but they trained him in more advanced hyugga fighting techniques.

At 11, he entered the chunnin exams, and passed the first test easily with his byakugan. The second test was harder, but the survival skills he had obtained on missions helped him easily pass the test. He got past the third test without problems, and became a chunnin.

At the age of 16, he had mastered most of the techniques, and thought of better strategies to use with the techniques. He was very skilled for his age, and knew many advanced clan techniques. He was appointed a jounin after completing several more missions, and fullfilling the requirements.

Other: Is an excellent strategist. Usually late.

Kinamaru was training with his fellow branch members, and was getting tired. He then remembered he was supposed to be at the academy an hour ago to be pre-told who his team was. He would only get there in time to appear on time, but that was really what counted.

He arrived at the academy, and after being scolded for being late by the other newly appointed jounin, and some ones that had been there before. Others, who understood, tried to get the others off his case. He then arrived in the classroom, and the genin teams were read.

Ok, here's mine. I made up two Kekkei Genkai, the "Copy" (can't think of a better name, so sue me), which is a version of the Sharingan with some quirks.

Name: Klinkin (formal title)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Rank: Chunin
Appearance: Pretty normal, save the armor. Has black hair, always wears sunglasses with adjustable tint.
Kekkei Genkai (If applicable): Inventor, Copy, spirit host (all covered below)
Jutsu: Fire justu, often made up on the spot
Personality: Intelligent, but has no patience for stupid people.
History: Part of the Inventor clan of ninja, ninja who are closer to samurai in some ways. He is the first person to earn the "Klinkin" title in several generations.
Other: There's a lot of "Other" stuff about him.
Kekkei Genkai:
Copy: This kekkei-genkai is similar to both the Sharingan and Byakugan. It allows a person to see the chakra flow of his opponent, but not the chakra points (though their position can be inferred). Masters of this kekkei genkai can tell what type of justu an opponent is using by the chakra flow, and duplicate that justu themselves. This even applies to other kekkei genkai, but unlike the Sharingan, one cannot memorize the justu easily. The sign of this justu is a lack of pupil or iris; an iris (but not pupil) appears, changing color determining which opponent it is focused on. The eyes can also take on the appearance of another ocular kekkei genkai when copying it.
Inventor: Not really a kekkei genkai, this just symbolizes extreme intelligence (part genetic and part due to intense schooling) that is common to all ninja of the Inventor clan.
Spirit Host: Similar to being a demon host, but instead plays host to a less powerful spirit of an ancestor. Klinkin has in him the spirit of the original Klinkin, the Inventor.
Inventor Clan:
The Inventor clan was founded by the famous Klinkin, the Inventor, one of the top ninja of his time. They use very advanced technology at the expense of justu. They even have experimental, short-range laser guns (weak, mostly stun only). They are reclusive, and thus their technological advancement is greater than other clans/villages.
Equipment:
Sword (chakra-empowered, made of pure diamond; Klinkin sometimes keeps a titanium coating around it, covering the diamond core)
Shield (Has a passive chakra-absorbing matrix with a range of 1 cm from the shield)
Armor (relatively heavy for a ninja, versitile)
Gun (an experimental photon beam handheld rifle; most powerful setting is stun, has a decent rate of fire. Shots move at speed of light)

That's pretty much everything. I don't think it's god modding...

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Of course, because having a photon laser rifle in a time era before blunderbusses is no where NEAR godmodding.

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Well, actually, this time era has computers, laptops even, but that's still godmodding. Ninja's weren't meant to have guns, way too much of an advantage.

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I only specified that it is an era before guns. The only physical weapons ninja use lack gunpowder, let alone lasers.

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why i'm reading I dunno I'm not really joining buuuut

A special weapon for some ninja were small bombs in the means of
smoke or explosive. As to whether the bomb would simply be used
as cover like a flasher or smoke, or if it would be intended to
do damage with like shrapnel or simply an explosion is just plain choice.
(although an explosion would need to be properly planned so as
to not give away a hiding spot)

So depends what era, but Naruto isn't in an era... it's not really even
in reality for that matter. Photons wouldn't really stun people though
just like burn them since it's light energy.

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The whole point is a photon beam powerful enough to do anything but stun would be too large to lug around.

If you've noticed, he's more like a samurai than a run-of-the-mill ninja. That's the whole point.

And I think I can say that within 10 or so years from now we could make a photon beam rifle capable of stunning someone. The Inventor Clan is ahead of people in technology. However, they're kinda skimpy on justu. That's why half of Klinkin's justu are made up on the spot.

It's no more god modding than the Sharingan.

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Umm, the Sharingan can be blocked? >_> Oh yeah, and it CANT COPY OTHER BLOODLINE LIMITS, EITHER <_<

Besides, If two Mangekyou powers is already god mod, how is a light-speed laser gun not godmoddy?

Though you could make it fire bullet type items with miniature explosive tags.

And besides, how can your body change something to itself when it doesn't have what it wants to change?

~Stip~

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What if you're getting changed or something and they just barge in, saying "I OWN THE HOUSE, I OWN YOU. DINNER'S READY." ...doesn't seem very fair to me

Ok, then tell me what I should change.

Notice: The copy kekkei genkai (will someone please suggest another name?) can't store copied justu beyond one fight. The Sharingan can. The copy kekkei genkai can be blocked just as the Sharingan.

Hey, I see guys going around with deflection justu (in other words, almost impossible to hit), and everyone else has loaded up with almost every single justu imaginable, I need to use something. Klinkin has some fire justu and the copy kekkei-genkai, that's it. I think we can justify a photon gun of some sort. Besides, he knows about the large clan's fighting styles, he's not going to fight a Hyugga by trying to throw stuff at him or coming at him with his sword without armor on. Besides, like I said, it's weak (stun only, a tough person can even resist the effects to a degree, and that's only if it hits something like the head or the chest), and yet can only fire twice a second without depleting the battery in less than ten shots. He can recharge one shot a second. And don't forget the heat generated by the shot. The barrel will melt if he just stands there and junks shots at the opponent. I'm just trying to give my guy a set of options without having him be a rip-off of one of the main characters. Just because I have a better imagination and I have thought of a way to make my character powerful enough to not get plastered the first second doesn't mean I'm god modding. There are plenty of drawbacks; I just fight in a way which minimizes those drawbacks.

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You should know that Hyuuga can attack through armor...

Oh, and didn't I clearly state in the rules that no demon/spirit hosts were allowed...?

And trying to copy Bloodline Limits is like trying to bake a pie without flavor, you miss the key ingredient And by the way, you didn't state his village, either...

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Jackstick wrote:

What if you're getting changed or something and they just barge in, saying "I OWN THE HOUSE, I OWN YOU. DINNER'S READY." ...doesn't seem very fair to me

He's from the reclusive Inventor clan. I said that already.

You didn't say anything about spirit hosts, only demon hosts. Spirit hosts are much less powerful. Instead of a demon, they have another ninja. Generally a jonin-level one.

And no, armor or other metal can diffuse a Gentle Fist strike. That's why Neji never hit Naruto in the forehead. Besides, if they can strike through anything, then that's god modding. It's "Oh, you're within reach, I do 361 palms, now you can't use your chakra, I win." You saw Naruto vs. Neji. The only reason Naruto won was because he had a demon in him so he could use chakra after his points were sealed.

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Bingo. Gentle Fist is annoyingly godmoddy, and demon or spirit, they're both Jinchuuriki, though if you remove the kekkei genkai copying, and make your Photon-gun the "Tag Gun" i recommended, I'll allow you to use your char

Or instead of photons, make it fire needles with a paralyzing poison?

~Stip~

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What if you're getting changed or something and they just barge in, saying "I OWN THE HOUSE, I OWN YOU. DINNER'S READY." ...doesn't seem very fair to me

Tahu, the whole principle of my complaint isn't the restrictions of the gun. It's the gun itself. You say it's inventive, but it's not. There's lots of things that actually fit into the Naruniverse that make for an original character. A reclusive clan would be the least likely to be above in technology, for the fact of lack of resources and information. A single small clan secluded from everyone else would have no means to develop a weapon that we don't use in our age of technology even. Not to mention having a gun defeats the whole purpose of being a ninja. You stand, shoot, stun, stabbity. Naruto fights are about strategies and jutsus, using your wits and strength to overcome your opponent with your own abilities and limited weapons.

Not to point a ray gun at your opponent, stun them, and go lawl while you own them. If this were truely an advanced civilization, the most realistic gun they'd have still is a highly inaccurate slow loading rifle.

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Fine, I'll fix some things. I'll replace the photon beam with an honest-to-goodness M-16 or something.

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No, that was not sarcasm. I was going to use some gas-powered rifle I found in Popular Science, but I can't find the magazine and I forget the name. I'm just looking for a ranged weapon that's faster than a stupid thrown knife.

Here's V2 of my character.

Name: Klinkin (formal title)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Rank: Chunin
Appearance: Pretty normal, save the armor. Has black hair, always wears sunglasses with adjustable tint.
Kekkei Genkai (If applicable): Inventor: This is not technically a Kekkei Genkai, just an above-average intelligence caused by a mix of genes and teaching style. People with this Kekkei Genkai have extremely analytical minds and photographic memories. Klinkin has memorized each hand sign and the function thereof; if he can see the hand signs, he can tell what justu it is. Even early on in the hand signs, he can narrow the type down. He can also use this to make up justu on the spot.
Jutsu: Fire justu, often made up on the spot
Personality: Intelligent, but has no patience for stupid people.
History: Part of the Inventor clan of ninja, ninja who are closer to samurai in some ways. He is the first person to earn the "Klinkin" title in several generations.
Other: There's a bit of "Other" stuff about him.
Inventor Clan:
The Inventor clan was founded by the famous Klinkin, the Inventor, one of the top ninja of his time. They use more advanced technology at the expense of justu. They are about ten or so years ahead of other clans, and are one of the few clans to actually use technology as a weapon. Despite their reclusiveness, they have contacts with far-flung nations who use guns and tanks for their militaries due to lack of ninja.
Equipment: Klinkin carries equipment more suitable for a samurai than a ninja. His main melee weapon is a sword made of pure diamond. To complement it, he has a large, black shield (large enough to hide behind) that can absorb chakra on contact (this ability is defensive only). He wears armor that slows his movement a bit, but provides good protection against kunai and shuriken. His primary ranged weapon is a custom M-16 titled the M-16 G5. It has an expanded clip of 35 shots, a scope, and a gas-powered ejection system to prevent jamming.

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OOC: Yeah Tweedy, if you'd like though let the approved chars exist

And Tahu, I'm sorry, but I really can't approve the char as it is now. Oh, and those country's don't exist on the planet Naruto is done on. and no, you can't have a connection with aliens >_> We shall discuss this in PM as Znath suggested.

~Stip~

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What if you're getting changed or something and they just barge in, saying "I OWN THE HOUSE, I OWN YOU. DINNER'S READY." ...doesn't seem very fair to me

Ok, I got rid of the gun. Happy NOW? Not that I have a chance against a Hyugga.
Name: Klinkin (formal title)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Rank: Chunin
Appearance: Pretty normal, save the armor. Has black hair, always wears sunglasses with adjustable tint.
Kekkei Genkai (If applicable): Inventor: This is not technically a Kekkei Genkai, just an above-average intelligence caused by a mix of genes and teaching style. People with this Kekkei Genkai have extremely analytical minds and photographic memories. Klinkin has memorized each hand sign and the function thereof; if he can see the hand signs, he can tell what justu it is. Even early on in the hand signs, he can narrow the type down. He can also use this to make up justu on the spot.
Jutsu: Fire justu, often made up on the spot. His main justu is the “Flamethrower Justu,” an Inventor clan special that requires a minimum of hand signs and chakra while still maintaining good range.
Personality: Intelligent, but has no patience for stupid people.
History: Part of the Inventor clan of ninja, ninja who are closer to samurai in some ways. He is the first person to earn the "Klinkin" title in several generations.
Other: There's a bit of "Other" stuff about him.
Inventor Clan:
The Inventor clan was founded by the famous Klinkin, the Inventor, one of the top ninja of his time. They use more advanced technology at the expense of justu. They are about ten or so years ahead of other clans, and are one of the few clans to actually use armor and shields.
Equipment: Klinkin carries equipment more suitable for a samurai than a ninja. His main melee weapon is a sword made of pure diamond. To complement it, he has a large, black shield (large enough to hide behind) that can absorb chakra on contact (this ability is defensive only). He wears armor that slows his movement a bit, but provides good protection against kunai and shuriken.

Oh, and on another topic, Stip mentioned a needle-shooter. Where was that ever in Naruto?

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