I have to remove this for archival reasons. Sorry.

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Imagine a perfect beach
Without a mermaid
Imagine a perfect hideaway
Without a time
Imagine a perfect Eden
Without a friend, without a serpent
"Feeling lonely and content at the same time,
I believe, is a rare kind of happiness"

Just a little update, the senior professor of rhetoric had a look at this, and, barring a few typos, he said it was one of the most well-written rhetorical analyses he'd read. Clearly I'm a genius.

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Imagine a perfect beach
Without a mermaid
Imagine a perfect hideaway
Without a time
Imagine a perfect Eden
Without a friend, without a serpent
"Feeling lonely and content at the same time,
I believe, is a rare kind of happiness"

Minus the lack of variety of vocabulary (particularly with no original ways to word 'substance' or 'identification') causing it to appear repetitive to read, he's pretty much right.

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Goten is dead!

The words substance, consubstantiality, term, symbol, experience, identification, etc. all refer to specific ideas/terminologies in the context of Burkean rhetoric. Just FYI.

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Imagine a perfect beach
Without a mermaid
Imagine a perfect hideaway
Without a time
Imagine a perfect Eden
Without a friend, without a serpent
"Feeling lonely and content at the same time,
I believe, is a rare kind of happiness"