Statistics: Posted by Thorita — July 6th, 2007, 7:59 am
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At first, I got an image of the girl off The Ring in my head, the girl staring at me in the hall o.O
Statistics: Posted by Fear — April 11th, 2007, 3:21 pm
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Flea I can find no such similar poem anywhere online
and trust me I can find about anything. Either supply the
link or stuff the accusations.
I never made any accusation of plagirism, just saying that I've seen very similiar poems on myspace, usually followed with a "If you agree with this, send it to 5 friends by midnight and you will meet your true love" or some other sappy stuff like that. Sounds like someone has a guilty concious.
Should I run across another buliten with the poem I'm thinking of, I'll make sure to PM the address to you. 
Statistics: Posted by Flea Hobo — April 9th, 2007, 1:47 pm
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Quote:
She say the most weirdest things to you
When she trying to talk to you
She tries to hard and you can see it
All she wants ..
is you to give her a chance
Give up what your friends think of her
she may not have a pretty face
she dose not have the perfect body
The change in structure was annoying. At the beginning the first letter of each line was capitalized, then drifting off into some capitalized, then no letters capitalized for a paragraph. Its minor but consistent structure helps keep attention.
Besides that only a few typo's.
Nice Job.
Statistics: Posted by Aquinas the commentator — April 8th, 2007, 6:58 am
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66spookyKid66 be ashamed
Scoupe123 ditto
Flea I can find no such similar poem anywhere online
and trust me I can find about anything. Either supply the
link or stuff the accusations.
Back on topic
Aside from a few spelling typo's it does seem to go fine together
though does seem a bit choppy here and there. Personal taste
is that it's a little depressing and just a little too pessimistic for
my preferances, but the style's up to the one making it.
Statistics: Posted by Znath — April 8th, 2007, 1:02 am
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However if it isn't your poem, as Flea seems to be saying, if you don't own up there will be consequences.
Statistics: Posted by Tweedy — April 8th, 2007, 1:00 am
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becuase its usally the boys who say it
Amen to that brother.
Girls are too subtle <_< *glares*
Its a great poem... Its sweet, but if you like a guy you should just tell him. Even if your unsure how he feels about you the worst he can do is say 'No'. And if he is a nice guy he will do it nicely.... I know I would
Statistics: Posted by Gamestar — April 7th, 2007, 4:05 pm
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Statistics: Posted by Derby R One — April 7th, 2007, 1:37 pm
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Lol im kidding it was ... actully creepy
if you like someone just go out and say it, " I LUV J00!!111!!!11!!" .....
he will be shocked and creeped out (at that moment).
becuase its usally the boys who say it
Statistics: Posted by BOOM! — April 7th, 2007, 1:22 pm
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the girl that you see in the halls
starring at you
trying to make you notice her
She say the most weirdest things to you
When she trying to talk to you
She tries to hard and you can see it
All she wants ..
is you to give her a chance
Give up what your friends think of her
she may not have a pretty face
she dose not have the perfect body
What she has is her love for you
the type of girl you want on the inside
just not the type of girl on the outside
would you give up that part
and just make her your's
she would stay up all night when your sick
make you laugh when your sad
tell you your wonderful the way you are
think about all the time
lock her arms around you and never want to let go
Just not the type of girl you want on the outside
What do you think it is my first so yeah
Added the title indicator.
~TweedyStatistics: Posted by Gill Shop — April 7th, 2007, 1:06 pm
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